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Feb 10Liked by Mek

Hi Mek, Thanks for sharing this one. (I listened to the audio.) I love the way Vonnegut uses dialogue to propel the narrative, but also to hint at larger themes. Dialogue is so versatile bc you can use it to show tension, disagreement & gaps between what is said and thought. It’s clearly an allegorical story…. Though when I started to drill down I wasn’t entirely sure what or how to think about that allegory. Is it a comment on capitalism? Colonialism? Patriarchy? The Anthropocene? Etc… But because it’s done in a playful and humoured way, I enjoyed the uncertainty of it. I guess the uncertainly means readers are less likely to feel like they’re being lectured at, & they can bring more of themselves to the story.

On another note, I’ve started noticing my attention drawn to adverbs in text: wretchedly, bravely, gamely. I’d not have looked twice at them before studying writing. Though, maybe I’m misremembering.

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